My stuff on Soundcloud - 24 tracks

[Tokyohunter]

Hi all,
I finally got round to putting 24 of my demo tracks up on Soundcloud to get some feedback.
4 are from the Dubsounds radio session from 3 years ago( Amulet/Probe/Skybound/Clockwork Utopia),a few appeared on Electromancer further back than that. the rest are demos in various states of completion(with the aim of developing further after some feedback).I have more I will put up over the next couple of weeks.

I can't change the order the tracks are in , so there's no significance as to the order they appear...

www.soundcloud.com/tokyohunter

Any feedback or comments appreciated.

[Tokyohunter]

Any feedback?

[primtim34]

What kind of feedback are seeking specifically? I'm willing to help, but I need more direction (which track to start with, what are you looking for, etc). Hope I can be helpful.

[Tokyohunter]

Thanks, you're right I should be more specific.
I'll post below a few tracks and comments for each one.
I'm planning on re-working the most popular ones where needed.
at the moment I can't play anything loud on speakers so am relying on Sennheiser HD-25 headphones for mixing etc,which is ok to a point but it's hard to judge the feel of the bass frequencies who they resonate through a room (does that make sense?)

Any comments on track pacing/length would be usful too.
I'm usually certain about the actual synth sounds I use so that's less of an issue.
If there's anything particularly irritating that would be useful to know too.

Ok , here's goes 3:


Smokescreen Smile:
Wondering whether to make a less retro version of it?
I'm happy with the melodies...
soundcloud.com/tokyohunter/smokescreen-smile

Torsion Fields
Thinking introducing a fast groovy bass synth bassline... It's quite sparse, I would probably modulate the repeating sequence that can be heard throughout...
Is the build up intro too long?

soundcloud.com/tokyohunter/torsion-fields


Nano
I see this as kind of music to read to or work to...
I'm pondering to expand it melody-wise.
I was thinking to shorten it near the beginning.

soundcloud.com/tokyohunter/nano

[Pete H Y P N o T R I P]

I like the retro version sound you have in Smokescreen smile - growing up on Numan I'm addicted to those strings. Neat sounds - have you considered get a vocalist in?

[Tokyohunter]

Thanks Pete for the comments,
I'll be uploading an updated version of it Smokescreen Smile this week.I'll post the link here when the new one is up.

Vocals? I've been considering that... I have some ideas for that.